I meant to avoid you,
But the moments didn't let me.
I decided to ignore you,
But our talks dint allow me.
I thought of hating you,
But the innocence stopped me.
I wanted to hurt you,
Instead your sadness hurt me.
True friendships can never be avoided,
Even if ignored or stopped, they hurt more.
Ajey
18-Mar-2007
P.S - Picture taken at Brown County National Park, Indianapolis in May-2005
That is such a sweet poem. And I love the picture too.
ReplyDeleteOh the previous comment was from me. I wanted to sign it at the end and clicked too soon. I am not able to comment using my blogger ID and password so have to do it as anon and then sign it. In case I click too soon again here goes,
ReplyDelete-Travel plaza
Ohh you again in those lovely lines.
ReplyDeleteI can feel the emotions depicted here.
I also wrote something similar here.
@Travel Plaza - Glad to see you back. You have been gone for a loooong time. I hope u will start posting soon....or may be you have....will chk your blog now!
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@Cuckoo- Thanks. I liked your poem, its surprising to notice how few lines can speak so much.
sweet one. n well complimented by the pic..
ReplyDeleteYou got to copyright ur writings before they get printed on grand-scale cards :)
ReplyDelete@ Bharat J - Thanks
ReplyDelete@Edmund - Thanks...Well...I normally do not post my poems and stories but this time, had no time to write anything new.
im sooo moved!! thank u for inspring :)
ReplyDeletenice poem published on right time :) .. it s true , that true friendships can never be avoided, and if we try , it hurts more..
ReplyDeletenice picture too !
lovely words...thats very very true & also the lovely shot!
ReplyDeleteTruly amazing, nice lines. I can feel your feelings. Nice shot as well.
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ReplyDeleteThanks....and Happy Friendship day!